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Forbidden... by ~shadowkit:iconshadowkit:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open




Though it is forbidden,
my heart pounds for you.
Though I will be condemned,
I can't live without you.
Though it is evil and sinned,
it is nothing but pure for you.
My tears will fall,
while my heart will sing,
all for the one who is forbidden.
Though it is looked down upon,
my heart soars high with you.
Though they bring tears to my eyes,
I protect against them for you.
Though it will be fought,
my heart will not stop loving you.
My tears will fall,
while my heart will sing,
all for the one who is,
forbidden...
©2005-2010 ~shadowkit
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Author's Comments

So this poem is pretty old now. Everyone seems to love it and I'm quite grateful for that. I wrote this in the early hours of the morning only after having search for a pencil and paper, getting told to go to bed by my father, and using a flashlight to write.
The picture was done by :iconkwncy: for my poem and I think it fits it perfectly. You should check them out because they're really good.

Comments


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=YellowRibbons Nov 21, 2005, 6:19:04 PM
This piece is so touching and comes from every soul who as ever loved who they could never have.. it's beautiful and I love it.
:iconattila-fox:
!Attila-fox Nov 21, 2005, 6:19:16 PM
OMDFG! Tiff, I love it. *sighs, thinking back* So many times have I felt that...
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~shadowkit Nov 21, 2005, 6:23:59 PM
^-^ Thanks! I just had to right it... we were discussing Romeo and Juliet and I thought about my friends who are in forbidden relationships...

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A melody is like seeing someone for the first time. The physical attraction. Sex. But then, as you get to know the person, that's the lyrics. Their story. Who they are underneath. It's the combination of the two that makes it magic. "Music and Lyrics"
:iconlucidlivid:
~LucidLivid Nov 22, 2005, 7:48:56 AM
Very nice. Great flow and wicked words :)
:iconshadowkit:
~shadowkit Nov 22, 2005, 12:53:08 PM
*bows*

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A melody is like seeing someone for the first time. The physical attraction. Sex. But then, as you get to know the person, that's the lyrics. Their story. Who they are underneath. It's the combination of the two that makes it magic. "Music and Lyrics"
:iconshadowkit:
~shadowkit Nov 22, 2005, 12:53:54 PM
Thanks a lot! ^-^

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A melody is like seeing someone for the first time. The physical attraction. Sex. But then, as you get to know the person, that's the lyrics. Their story. Who they are underneath. It's the combination of the two that makes it magic. "Music and Lyrics"
:iconcrimsonnemesis:
~CrimsonNemesis Nov 28, 2005, 1:18:15 PM
Beautiful and Haunting! props!

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"Loyalty is the greatest gift."-Ookami
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~shadowkit Nov 29, 2005, 8:32:14 PM
WOOTNESS!!!! ^-^ Thanks mark! I love it when you comment... it makes me feel special *grins* and like I'm actually a good poet!

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A melody is like seeing someone for the first time. The physical attraction. Sex. But then, as you get to know the person, that's the lyrics. Their story. Who they are underneath. It's the combination of the two that makes it magic. "Music and Lyrics"
:iconcrimsonnemesis:
~CrimsonNemesis Dec 1, 2005, 3:55:31 AM
YOU ARE!

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"Loyalty is the greatest gift."-Ookami
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